Blog:My Opinion About SM64 Bloopers (Onyxking)

Some people say they hated Onyxking because of him being a ripoff of SMG4, but that channel has more problems than just an SMG4 ripoff.

To start off, there's the poor editing and sloppy pacing in his videos:

1. His Garry's Mod backgrounds are a little blurry and pixelated compared to SMG4's. He's also not very good at doing their Gmod expressions. 2. The movements are also poor too. Here's one example in "Fishing Trip Gone HORRIBLY WRONG!!" where in the ending, when Mario and Onyxking go out to get Dairy Queen, not only were they walking poorly as if they're running in place, but they're also "walking" in the wrong direction too. And another in "We Killed Miku!!" where Rosalina's gmod model was spazzing for no reason making it look like as if Onyxking couldn't get her to stand up when could've just used an SM64 model of Rosalina instead. 3. Did I also mention that sometimes, the gmod models for the characters can be a little too shadowy and a little too bright mostly? 4. The text captions for the character's dialogue appears for a little too long mostly. 5. In "Peach makes EVERYONE go on BLIND DATES", the Toad's date with Jeffy segment just shows Toad tied up in a chair, and that's about it. Making it look like as if he can't bother putting Jeffy in it. You can just easily replace Jeffy with a picture of Toadette and nothing would be important.

Then, there's the sound effects, music, and voice clips being used out of place, wrong times, lacking, etc.: 1. To start off, there's one part in "Mario Crossing New Horizons!" where after Isabelle says she still has give Tom Nook the Nook Miles, Mario says to her "Hey, it's okay, don't cry" even though, she's not even crying at all. 2. In "Super Mario Mafia" has Kermit the Frog not even using any voice clips of his at all. You can easily replace Kermit with another character. Also, when his getaway car falls off a cliff, when he screams, he uses the sound of people screaming instead when there's only just him and Mario in the falling car. 3. In "MarioNite (A Fortnite Video)", when Onyxking dodges the lightning bolts, he says "Stop it! Stop it! STOP TAUNTING ME!" which feels a little unfitting to make him say that there.

Then, there's also the errors. Ranging in from Grammar errors, Plot Holes, Ironies, Continuity Errors, Misleading Thumbnails, False Advertisings, and more: 1. Let's start with the Grammar. Most of the time, the character's dialogue have words and letters mixed around or missing as if they have a speech impediment or you can't understand what they're really saying. One glaring example is in "Mario Behind Bars" where a policeman says "I'm gonna go myself some doughnuts, why don't you saw to your new cell mate" when he could've just said "I'm gonna go get myself some doughnuts, why don't you say hi (or hello) to your new cellmate". And in "Mario Star Allies" after Mario says "To get this fatass to give me the money he owes me.", the next scene shows him accidentally saying the same line he said (at 3:57) as if it looks like he was meant to say something else, but it was put there for no reason showing how lazy Onyxking can be with his captions. 2. Now let's get on to the plot holes. The first plot hole shows in the beginning of "Mario Joins Doki Doki Literature Club Plus", Mario bursts in the castle in a panic in need of help, but, what exactly does Mario even need help with in the first place? It doesn't show because the plot hole stops when Mario sees Onyxking playing DDLC. Another plot hole shows in "Mario Sits on the Toilet" where Mario tells Luigi he got back from "Another traumatizing experience that may have scarred him for life" but we don't even know what he means by that. 3. And then, here's the misleading thumbnail and false advertisings. First the thumbnail for "Mario's Jumpscare Mansion!!" shows Spooky, but she only has a minor role in the episode. Instead, her replacement is Melody from Luigi's Mansion, who's just stupidly named "Scary", which is a dumb name Onyxking came up with who's voice clips are Isabelle voice clips. And, the thumbnail for "Super Smashdom: Ultimate!!" shows Mario punching Donkey Kong, but not only does Mario appear less in the video, but also DK never appeared in it. Also, Onyxking said that there's going to be more episodes being uploaded at the beginning of every month, but there hasn't been one, so it seems like that "Super Smashdom: Ultimate!!" was going to be a spin-off or experimental project like his Super Wario 64 Bloopers, Onyxking's Random Crap, and Battle of the Retarded villains, but there isn't anymore after that since presumably Onyxking must've didn't feel like it, so it's just made to be a one shot video.

And now here's the characters: 1. Onyxking's voice from late 2019 to present is kinda loud. Not even lowering the volume can help it. 2. MC Hammer Bro feels like a Fishy Boopkins ripoff and his voice is too quiet and fast, you can't even hear or understand what he's saying. 3. Calem the Spider also feels like a ripoff of Jeff the Spider from Billy and Mandy, but not only that, he doesn't even look like a spider, but rather a purple frog with cat whiskers or walrus tusks instead. 4. Grasshopper, while she is nothing but a "Spiderman Wannabe" (As said by Mario in "Mario Joins Squid Game!!"), she's not really that bad. Plus her voice was okay. 5. Starlow is also a female clone of Bob. 6. But unlike SMG4's OC characters, his OC's, Grasshopper and Calem (and Starlow, if you count her), don't steal spotlights from other Mario characters who are not Mario, Luigi, and/or Onyxking and thus, those latter characters still appear in his videos such as Peach, Toad, and the Wario Bros. Unlike what SMG4 does to them in his videos from 2018 to present. And, they're not shoehorned in his videos as much as SMG4 does to his original characters, especially either the female characters, or just simply putting more than 1 OC character in one video.

Now to finish off, overall:

His videos are not bad, they just feel like because of the problems his editing has, they make them feel like they're rushed. Also, unlike SMG4's videos nowadays, he doesn't censor the F and S words thankfully, at least until "I'M STUCK IN THE ELEVATOR".

What do you think of Onyxking's videos? Should they be on this site, or somewhere else? Let me know.